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Searow - The Night Elf Traitor



Stats:
Affiliation: Scourge
Attack Animation: 0.3 / 0.3
Damage: 55 - 63
Casting Animation: 0.56 / 0.51
Armor: 3.23
Base Attack Time: 1.7
Movespeed: 295
Missile Speed: Instant
Attack Range: 128 (melee)
Sight Range: 1800 / 800


STR: 19+3

AGI: 16+1.3
INT: 23+2

Background story:
Searow was the guardian of the night elfves gate to the capital city. He was very greed in his whole life. When the Legion came to Azeroth, he saw the chance to earn very lots of money. He had a big plan, but it had some sacrafice too. He decided to let the Demons to reach the Tree of life, for a lot of money, and unbilieveble power. Archimond Accepted it in the cost of his "good" soul, and loosing his race-the night elves-. Searow accepted it and Archimond defeated the tree of life, and gave the power to Searow. But Archimond didnt want such a powerfull creature lost, so he prisoned him inside a gem. Searow Woke up in the field of the Ancients.


Spells:

Soul Prison(Q):

Description: In the few years been in the prison taught Searow the mechanics of the prison, and he can use it too
LvL1: Prisons the enemys soul silencing and blinding them. Lasts 2 seconds. Mana cost: 50. CD:15
LvL2: Prisons the enemys soul silencing and blinding them. Lasts 3 seconds. Mana cost: 60. CD: 15
LvL3: Prisons the enemys soul silencing and blinding them. Lasts 4 seconds. Mana cost: 70. CD: 15
LvL4: Prisons the enemys soul silencing and blinding them. Lasts 5 seconds. Mana cost: 80. CD: 15
Note:This ability has a sub ability.
Note2: Blinding means 65% miss chance
Framework: A hand comes out of the ground catching the enemys soul.


Sub-Ability(Q):

Description: Crushes the enemys soul.
LvL1: Crushes the enemys soul dealing 40. Mana: 50. CD: 15
LvL2: Crushes the enemys soul dealing 60. Mana: 60. CD: 15
LvL3: Crushes the enemys soul dealing 80. Mana: 70. CD: 15
LvL4: Crushes the enemys soul dealing 100. Mana: 80. CD: 15



Bone Armor(W):

Description: Raises a shield around himself incrasing armor and reflects damage.
LvL1: Incrases armor by 3. Reflects 5% of the damage taken. Lasts 10 seconds. CD: 15. Mana: 40
LvL2: Incrases armor by 5. Reflects 10% of the damage taken. Lasts 15 seconds. CD: 20. Mana: 60
LvL3: Incrases armor by 7. Reflects 15% of the damage taken. Lasts 15 seconds. CD: 20. Mana: 70
LvL4: Incrases armor by 10. Reflects 20% of the damage taken. Lasts 15 seconds. CD: 20. Mana: 80
Framework: 8 bones reaises up from the ground forming a sield around Searow.
Note: Can be used on self and ally.




Counter Attack:

Description: Searow places a buff everytime he attacks an enemy, and if that enemy misses, then he will be Counter Attacked
LvL1: Counter Attack Reduces the enemy armor by 2 and deals 80 damage. Mana cost: 40
LvL2: Counter Attack Reduces the enemy armor by 3 and deals 100 damage. Mana cost: 40
LvL3: Counter Attack Reduces the enemy armor by 4 and deals 120 damage. Mana cost: 40
LvL4: Counter Attack Reduces the enemy armor by 6 and deals 150 damage. Mana cost: 40
Note: The buff remains for 6 seconds on the enemy
Note2:The ability is passive and have a 3 seconds cooldown on all levels.(This passice skill requires mana)
Framework: An image(a copy of yourself) appears and attacks the enemy.
AOE: 500.



Double Soul(R):[ULTIMATE]

Description: Searow Frees his other soul(the good one).
LvL1: Summons your good side with 100-120 damage. CD: 100. Lasts 15 seconds
LvL2: Summons your good side with 100-120 damage and "Heal" Ability that heals 40 hp, and have 5 sec cd. Heal costs 50 at all level. CD: 80(for the other side). Lasts 20 seconds
LvL3: Summons your good side with 100-120 damage and "Heal" Ability and Mana regen aura that regenerates 1.2 manapoint/seconds in a 1000 AOE. CD: 60(for the other side). Lasts 40 seconds
Note: Mana cost is 175 in all level.
Note2: Your good side has 150 manapool
Note3Heal: The Heal costs 30 mana(on all [2-3] levels)
Framework: Summons the good side of you.


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PostSubject: Re: Searow - The Night Elf Traitor 

Forgive the misspells, its 3:27 here i am sleepy as hell, and idk... xD
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WOW! I don't know what happened to custom hero forums Smile
Its been quite active since aal-shamsi's heroes came up! Very Happy

Will review tommorow!
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^Well thts a good thing Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Searow - The Night Elf Traitor 

Very nice hero but your third is overpowered, at lvl 7 when you attack you can place a -10 armor debuff which would be devistating on int heroes in the early game....
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^ok thanks i'll balance it:)
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PostSubject: Re: Searow - The Night Elf Traitor 

It's nearly like slardars ultimate at lvl 1 now just with extra damage, it's still to strong
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PostSubject: Re: Searow - The Night Elf Traitor 

"Archimond defeated the tree of life, and gave the power to Searow". Y would He do this After Taking all the efforts bringing the undead to the world N Give it Some Unknown Furion look alike.
1st skill silence N Miss together with !5 sec cooldown.
3rd skill armor n return damage together that to 10 armor + 20% return
While the Ultimate is Quite Interesting!
Overall good some skills Needed 2 be nurfed
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RaMpAgEr^GodZ wrote:
"Archimond defeated the tree of life, and gave the power to Searow". Y would He do this After Taking all the efforts bringing the undead to the world N Give it Some Unknown Furion look alike.
1st skill silence N Miss together with !5 sec cooldown.
3rd skill armor n return damage together that to 10 armor + 20% return
While the Ultimate is Quite Interesting!
Overall good some skills Needed 2 be nurfed
Furion? More of like Sargeras look alike... Btw, Archimonde is dead b4 he destroyed the tree btw... Illidan destroyed it and thts why he was imprisoned for ten thousand years and ran away from the night elfs and also known as the betrayer. His reason? To do Arcane magic which is forbidden so tht he can be stronger to show off to Tyrande so tht Tyrande can fall in love with him(That was a lie made up by a Satyr[I think])

Illidan's intentions are normally for the good and not for the bad but mostly for himself...
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Capt'n God wrote:
WOW! I don't know what happened to custom hero forums Smile
Its been quite active since aal-shamsi's heroes came up! Very Happy

Will review tommorow!

Well.. im a senior hero maker, so that is one of my jobs too ^^(To make heroes)
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Review plox ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Searow - The Night Elf Traitor 

well firslty you put the picture of sargeras right ?? Very Happy

So the story is very wierd comapring to the knowers of the image.


But dont change it it looks so Awsome and IMba.

Wil try to review but have some other things right now.
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Yes this is sargeras Very Happy Sry for the bg story... i really suck at these things xD
and thank you
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Grim Reaper wrote:
Review plox ^^
Here you go!


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*Personal opinion : I think it'll be awesome for sargeras(searow) to be in game(so doom will have a best friend[trololol])

Hero Theme : i don't focus "that much" on themes but okay, its fine
Hero model : Mega T-up. I like a sargares model in game FTW!
Hero icon set : I don't focus on iconset at all
Stat & background story : Sooo...... I see your not good at BG's huh? Then welcome to my world Very Happy Nice BG!(no joke)

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1st Skill : Its okay and balanced since the sub destroys the spell. Its quite original
2nd Skill : Hmm..... It seems balanced. But it'll be mush better if you can put that armor on allies too. It'll be more useful and synergize to first skill
3rd Skill : Is it passive?!?!? Anyway i think its passive. Not really that original. Also its not balanced since you didn't state the cooldown
Ulti : I see no synergy at all except with the second skill. Not balanced because it has 5 cd and no mana cost. Also you didn't state the duration of the whole utli


Q1 Is the 3rd one passive or active?

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conclusion
T-null. The hero is kinda fun to play. Not boring. But some spells are not synergized with each other.
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Balanced, and sorry for some CD and mana lacks it was 3: 27 ^^^^^^
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PostSubject: Re: Searow - The Night Elf Traitor 

This is the only hero that I can consider somewhat worthy reviewing... even though I haven't review it yet. No offense mate, it's just my opinion but if you ask I would review regardless of how I think it is. My self intention of reviewing comes from whether I see it is worthy or not. Some of them you don't intend to change right after other ppl's obvious and concrete statements on your hero so I lost interest in reviewing like your Grim Reaper which I was supposed to review on that "Saturday".

What I define worthy of reviewing and what do I do before I even review:
I define worthy as looking neat, complete(with icons, names, and some small notes abt the skill, with hero bg and stats... basic stuffs la)
I also define worthy as the hero being completely original or having at least 1/2 of the hero with an original concept
I do a small review on the hero to see whether it is original then I look at other people's reviews.
If I do review you first before the others means I find your hero to have potential.

So since early on, you keep posting ideas roughly one a day which seemed that little time is put into this hero but I still look at it anyway. Most of them are like unoriginal(Well of course if you rip things apart, no matter how a spell looks it is still unoriginal. Refer to here for originality).

Here are some undone heroes which people pointed out have either unoriginal stuffs or incomplete information
http://www.dota2portal.org/t2046-brihmus-the-skeleton-hunter By Banebu and Qass (No reply to their reviews)
http://www.dota2portal.org/t2057-zathos-the-battle-priest
(2nd skill looks like ES Enchant Totem + his 3rd skill [Aftershock] using a target instead of AoE)
(Ultimate has insufficient info on what is the mana there for. Is it you gain mana? They lose mana? Or is it mana cost?)
http://www.dota2portal.org/t1034-grim-reaper-the-death
No response or changes to Blood4u's review, ultimate still remain as Rooftrellen's Ulti, and to my review is his 3rd skill still looking like SF's ulti. And back to Blood4u's review again, he mentioned that the 2nd skill is like Weaver's Carrion Swarm skill but without armor reduction. Also no response to it.


And the list goes on... if you get where I'm going on.
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No replys because i done what they asked omg -.-
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