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Grim Reaper - The Death

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Affiliation: Scourge
Attack Animation: 0.56 / 0.51
Damage: 44 - 56
Casting Animation: 0.5 / 0.83
Armor: 1.96
Base Attack Time: 1.7
Movespeed: 285
Missile Speed: 1000
Attack Range: 600
Sight Range: 1800 / 800
[19 + 1.2]------ [14 + 1.4]----- [20 + 2.4]

Background Story:
Since the Domintation of scourge.Theyre Necromancers were knwo to whole Azeroth by theyre mean experiments,and masacre of people only for studyng.The cult of Necromancers that was the one to be afraid the most Was the Cult of Shadow,an evil cult that has been given free-hand from Lich-King itself.This Evil cult only meaning on this world was to found the origin of an eternal entyty,wich has beeen forbbiden.They were searching for the Origin of Death.Apon many centuryes of Researching they have managed to create a model of the Death itself.IN the old books it was writen to have black clothes upon him never reavilng his face while using a schyte to end someone's existence.They searched over and over upon passing years,they havent managed anythyng.They coulndt understand how to fiind the death.Until the new Milnium The cult was dead,all of his members have perished.In those times a little farmer has just passed trhow the cavern of the cult just to recover somehting his child has lost the other day.Upon entering he had founde the Clother of the Death-image from the Necromancer.While winter was coming rapidly at theyre doors the farmer didnt sat on his minds and grabbed the clothing.While puting it on himself something strange happened,it was like the inner life of him was sucked up while remaining only bones.
The formula that the Necromancers got it wrong it was that the Death needed to be summoned again to this world with the special ingridient the human life !!
Now GrimReaper the death itself is seeking venage against the Necromancer that had summoned him and has joined the eternal fight of Defence of the Ancients.
Written by: Blood4u


Spells:
Ressurrect(Q):

Description: Grim ressurect a nearby corpse.
LvL 1:Ressurect 1 creep. Creep Gains Vampire Aura(10%Lifesteal). Mana: 60. CD:25.
LvL 2:Ressurect 2 creep. Creep Gains Vampire Aura(10% Lifesteal. Mana: 70. CD:20.
LvL 3:Ressurect 2 creep. Creep Gains Vampire Aura(10% lifesteal). Mana: 80. CD:15.
LvL 4:Ressurect 3 creep. Creep Gains Vampire Aura(10% lifesteal). Mana: 90. CD:10.
Note: All Creep lasts 50 sec. Grim can have only 6 creep at once.
-Note2: The ressurrected creeps have the same stats as when they lived.
Note3: Vampire aura does not stack with itself.
Framework: Like Animate Death Very Happy

Parasites(W):

Description: Grim sends a few Parasite on a target area.
LvL 1:Deals 30 dmg/second for 2 seconds.Mana: 60. CD:30
LvL 2:Deals 50 dmg/second for 2 seconds.Mana: 80. CD:25
LvL 3:Deals 60 dmg/second for 3 seconds.Mana: 100. CD:20
LvL 4:Deals 80 dmg/second for 3 seconds.Mana: 120. CD:15
Note: AOE=500.
Framework: Parasites attached to units(Like weavers spell).

Orb of Souls(E):

Description: The Death Collect the soul of the enemy he killed. And Deal damage if released.
LvL 1:Deals 10 dmg/soul. Souls can stack up to 6 stacks. Mana: 10 mana/soul. CD: 40
LvL 2:Deals 15 dmg/soul. Souls can stack up to 7 stacks. Mana: 15 mana/soul. CD: 30
LvL 3:Deals 20 dmg/soul. Souls can stack up to 8 stacks. Mana: 25 mana/soul. CD: 25
LvL 4:Deals 25 dmg/soul. Souls can stack up to 10 stacks. Mana: 35 mana/soul. CD: 20

Note:-Each Creep kill gives 1 soul, Each Hero kill gives you 2 soul.
-AOE:500
Framework: Like Shadow(or dark) Nova from Dacia Orpg.
How it looks like:
 

Shackles of Death(R)ULTIMATE:

Description: The Death shackles target enemies in a target area. Shackled units cant move, and lose life each second.
LvL 1: Units cant move for 3 seconds. Deals 60 dmg/sec for 3 seconds. Mana: 120. CD: 120.
LvL 2: Units cant move for 4 seconds. Deals 80 dmg/sec for 4 seconds. Mana: 150. CD: 100.
LvL 3: Units cant move for 5 seconds. Deals 100 dmg/sec for 4 seconds. Mana: 180. CD: 80.
Note: AOE is 300 Very Happy
Framework: Something like Entangle Roots, but Chains instaed of roots.

Credits:
Hiveworkshop
Playdota
Blood4u (Background)

Special Thanks:
Bob Marley [ R.I.P Sad ]. For the good musics i could listen to while writing this.




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PostSubject: Re: Grim Reaper- The Death 

Ok will do a super-short review on this hero b4 blood does n cont back wif my studies. Overall i would say tht this hero needs more thought into it as half of it is rly not original. 3rd skill resembles sf's ulti wif his soul storin skill tgthr. 2nd skill resembles weaver's swarm bt is area. 1st skill is fine bt needs buff-in. Ulti i gt nth to say. Will giv u a full on a saturday.
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ok il start on your bg i bearly got from school (7:30-16:30) so think how many hours i got a day anyway sorry for not reviewng the sec hero i ltry today aswell for both of them +bg.

Going on more important matters:THE DEATH TITLE IS TAKEN Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy (watch my status below my avatar Very Happy) so im going to somate this hero for stealing my title. :twisted:
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nono... you are dead:D not Death. Death = the thing that kill living things. Dead= Cool guys:D
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Btw thanks Very Happy
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What's up with the background story? i like to read them
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ahhaa ava i hope u read my com im going to school like a freaking slave 8 hours a day i bearly camed home geez Sad
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Blood4u wrote:
ahhaa ava i hope u read my com im going to school like a freaking slave 8 hours a day i bearly camed home geez Sad

What dead people learn in school?
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unfortunatly the we are reuired to learn anything as the living at the school but with some other usses:
-We need mathemathics for counting the souls that go trhow the gate and know who to split in half wich we need to multyply the numbers of years they can stay tehre and see when eternyty ends you know the usual
-need paint so we can make really macabre iamges that our beloved hell souls to watch and scare
-need history to tell them in how many macabre ways we have tortureated and killed the others before them
-need sport for stamina so we can manage to beat someone every sec
And so on so bad :twisted:
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Ok now im scared Very Happy( from Blood4u)
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Ok now im scared Very Happy( from Blood4u)

Yea, that's the point.
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Razz
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Hey scythe love the new name and total change and love the hero.
Avalon if you see this come on skype.
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Thanks Banebu Smile
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yeah grim reaper Razz
i will leave this to blood4u to review coz he love "death thing"

even i use this hero theme in my ninja map
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Very Happy
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Ok so now im gonna review on the hero


///////My review\\\\\\\

Firstly im starting with the hero/model choosing:they blend perfectly nothing to add more
Secondly going to the stats:u did the horible mistake ever youve put advanced statistics and forgot about the basics THE STR INT AGI sats Very Happy i know ure gonna reedit Very Happy

Backgrounds tory:geeez youve created a hero without a bg pathetic learn how to create(true joking and this is adressed to me and im telling you by this in a funny way that imnot sure i can provied one bg this day im hoping after tomorow school im going to write down from my head posibly)

Now going on the spells:First spell stough not ultra original it hasnt been used to review creeps ever just to create for visage 2 preteneds or make anubaraks small bugs;now the prob is
You need to give us more info:-armor/magic resist of the summoned creeps
-armor/mana of the summoned creeps
-atk dmg/type of the summoned creeps
-and a simple specification im making a simple math 6(creeps)x5 dps (from bite) x 20 sec(duration of bite)=600 dmg thorned to someone from only 1 primary spell lol you need to give us info about stacking/non stacking if non stackiong is availbe there is a prob asweel the cd is 20 sec and the duration is 5 sec meaning 6x5=30 sec wich gives us inifnite mana for the creeps in othere words.WE need hell of alot more speciifcations.

Second skill:it is 99% weavers spell im gonna cu it down you did nothng more just to make higher dmg but no armor lessering so i dont think i need to tell you more this is a Chich or an unoriginal spell im osrry to tell you that.

Third spell:thougs to me taken from dacia you didnt tell us if its aoe ,so basically we need more info and i think its aswell got from dacia orpg and not orignal im sorry to tell you that

Ultimate:it is basicaly again 99% unoriginal taken from roofltren the fact that you minimezed the dmg and longer the duration is so fcking not right.The duration was set to 3 sec because for the world this is 2 powerful 3 sec is the best amas and amalgum of the medium of a team fight disabling,aswell the dmg doesnt count so much but the duration itsefl.


My simple request:You did in less than 1 week 3 heroes wich is good continue but the fact that you crossed the line of creativity is bad.I was almost to do the same thing when i reated 2 many heroes with frost what you did was to create 2 many heroes with death,and so one this brings you to over exceding your imagination and so on using unorignal spells:My best advice is to change the paapper to some fire/water/elemental heroes so doing so you will fiind further sides of imagintaion AKA(mortar taken )
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Erm. I played 5 DotA games at all, so i dont know spells too much. I dont know what spell is original or unoriginal.
BTW: I took only the animation from Dacia Orpg not the ability.
Im gonna reedit
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GrimReaper wrote:
Erm. I played 5 DotA games at all, so i dont know spells too much. I dont know what spell is original or unoriginal.
BTW: I took only the animation from Dacia Orpg not the ability.
Im gonna reedit

np didnt know you only 5 dota games active at all you can play with me (pm dont crush me so hard im only playng dota for 5 years only Very Happy )
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Very Happy.
I reworked some of the spells, but i dont know what problem you got with my 3rd spell. I wrote the AOE maybe you didnt see but its there.
There is "-AOE:500"
And at last spell:
Rooftrellen Ulti:
"Summons an overgrowth of damaging vines and branches. Prevents all nearby enemies from moving or attacking and deals damage to each. "
-Source: Playdota.com

My ulti is an AOE spell. Not all nearby enemies Smile

Tell me if im wrong!( and i got a feeling that i am Very Happy )
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yeah even though it is an aoe think about it the same hunch (its 625 aoe near roffly the roof on fire Very Happy )and yours even if its 500 lower think about it its moveble even more imba than rooflys spell and btw dont you want to play dota with me (ofc team mates)
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I'll lower the Aoe Very Happy
By the way, yes i'd like to play a game with you Very Happy
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mess or skype for easyer talking?
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btw i hearby promote you to hero maker Very Happy congratz with the rep from me and avalon
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1st post: Messenger, I cant log in to skype (it says m not connected -.-)
2st post::O:O:O That 'd be cool. Thank for the reps and reviews.
+rep goes to you Blood4u, for reviews Smile
Oh and if Quassamzed see this, then you(Quassamzed) get a +rep too!
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